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一年級(jí)英語(yǔ)優(yōu)秀作文大全范文一：
My English friend
My English friend name is jim.
He is ten, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.he has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.
I and jim has become the good friend .several days later jim said that he wanted, he said that i love china .i will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .ok see you jim.see you.
一年級(jí)英語(yǔ)優(yōu)秀作文大全范文二：
Something about me
My name is Zhang Hong.I am a Chinese student.I am at Xinyi Primary school.I am in Class Three,Grade Six.I am 11.
I have a friend at school.His name is Tang Haonan.We like English very much.Who is your good friend?
一年級(jí)英語(yǔ)優(yōu)秀作文大全范文三：
Mother and I
My name is Wu jiawei. My English name is Jerry. I like fruits very much, but I don’t like eating vegetables.
Sometimes I like riding a bike and doing some exercises on the playground. I don’t like reading some books, but I like drawing pictures.
I like many animals, and I like English so much.
My mum is young, she is always very tired because she is very busy. Everyday she gets up early in the morning and cooks breakfast for us. In the evening, she often reads some newspaper before she goes to bed.
I love my mum, and she loves me too!
一年級(jí)英語(yǔ)優(yōu)秀作文大全范文四：
City
This is Beijing .It’s in the north of china .It’s got fourteen million people .It’s very big .There is a very famous wall in Beijing .The Great Wall .
It’s about six thousand seven handred kilomiters .And there is a famons square in the middle of Beijing it’s beautifui . It’s Tian’anmen square .I like Beijing .Iwant to go to Beijing one day.