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小升初優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文大全范文一：
I have a best friend
She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.
She favorite season is summer,because it's hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs.
Who's she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle.
小升初優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文大全范文二：
My Family
This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me.
My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat, so I often call him “fat man”。 He works at a factory. My mother works at a L.D.T. My mother has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on sports with my mother. On holidays my family often go to travel. I study at Guiyuan Primary School. We are very happy.
小升初優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文大全范文三：
Happy Weekend
OK, let me tell you something about my weekend.
I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl, I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we are going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites. I think, we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. Then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. We are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner, we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy.
This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend? Can you tell me?
小升初優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文大全范文四：
Happy Holiday
May Day is coming. I’m so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday.
In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.
My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!
I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday.