考場作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。所以，造句越簡單準確越好，復合句容易出錯被扣分。遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達時，可通過變通化繁為簡。
四年級英語作文范文一：
節約用水
Saving Water
One day, when I was washing my hands, my mother came to me and told me that I should not wash my hands with so much water. Until then did I realize that I had the habit of wasting water.In some cities, people even can’t not take a shower every day. From then on, I start to save water.
有一天，當我正在洗手的時候，我的媽媽向我走來，她告訴我說不應該用那么多的水洗手。直到那時候，我才意識到我養成了浪費水的習慣。在一些地方，人們甚至還不能夠每天洗澡。從那個時候起，我開始節約用水。
四年級英語作文范文二：
我的叔叔
My Uncle
I have an uncle, he is so kind to me and I like him so much. My uncle looks very young, he is busy with his work. But when he goes back on business, he will bring me the gift. Sometimes I will play basketball with him or we watch the game together, we share our opinion. My uncle is like my brother.
我有一個叔叔，他對我很好，我很喜歡他。我的叔叔看起來很年輕，他總是忙于工作。但是當他出差回來了，會給我帶禮物。有時候我會和他一起打籃球或者我們一起看比賽，彼此分享意見。我的叔叔就像是我的兄弟。
四年級英語作文范文三：
我的小小世界
My Little World
I have my little world, it is my bedroom. I decorate my bedroom with pink wall, on the wall, I paste so many lovely pictures. There are all kinds of pet’s picture, because my mother doesn’t allow me to raise a pet. My parents buy me a game machine, so I can relax myself. I love to stay at my bedroom when I am not happy.
我有我的小小世界，那就是我的房間。我用粉色的墻裝飾了我的房間，在墻上，我貼了很多可愛的圖片。那里有各種各樣的寵物圖，因為我的媽媽不允許我養寵物。我的父母給我買了一臺游戲機，這樣我就能放松自己了。當我不開心的時候，我喜歡在房間呆著。
四年級英語作文范文四：
我親愛的爺爺
My Beloved Grandpa
Before I was five years old, I lived with my grandparents most of the time. My grandpa liked to tell me the stories before I slept and I liked it so much. I also liked to follow my grandpa in the morning, when he walked to the shop and had the chat with his friends. I miss my grandpa all the time, when I have the time, I will visit him.
在我五歲以前，我大部分時間都是和爺爺奶奶住在一起。我的爺爺喜歡在我睡前給我講故事，我很喜歡聽。我也喜歡在早上跟著爺爺去商店，聽他和他的朋友們聊天。我一直想念著爺爺，在我有時間了，就會去看他。