優秀的作文一定是上下文連貫的。這是評分的一條原則。要把寫好的句子根據故事情節，事情發生的次序，使用表示并列、遞進等過渡詞，使文章連貫、流暢。
四年級閱讀英語作文范文一：
道歉
Apologize
I have a friend, her name is Lucy, I knew her when I was 4, she is my best friend. Sometimes we will argue for something, none of us want to say sorry, then we will not talk to each other for days. I am so afraid that we will lose our friendship, so I will always be the first one to apologize. Now we learn to understand each other.
我有一個朋友，她的名字叫露西，我在四歲的時候就認識了她，她是我最好的朋友。有時候我們會為一些小事爭吵，誰也不想要道歉，然后我們幾天也不說話。我很害怕我們的友誼會失去，所以我總是第一個道歉。現在我們學著去理解彼此。
四年級閱讀英語作文范文二：
驕傲的孔雀
The Arrogant Peacock
Today, I go to the zoo with my family. I see many animals. I see the monkey, the panda, the giraffe and so on. I am very impressed by the peacock, it is so beautiful, especially when it opens its tail. But the thing is that the peacock won’t open its tail easily, it is so arrogant. I always wait for it to open its tail.
今天,我和我的家人去動物園。我看到許多動物。我看到了猴子,熊貓,長頸鹿等等。孔雀給我留下了非常深刻的印象,它是如此美麗,特別是當它打開它的尾巴的時候。但問題是孔雀不會輕易打開它的尾巴,它是如此傲慢。我總是等待著它開屏。
四年級閱讀英語作文范文三：
我得到了表揚
I Got Praised
Today, I was so happy, because my English teacher praised me. Last week, she asked us to hand in the paper about describing the father. When she gave back the paper, she praised me in front of the class, because I wrote the paper with all my heart. She said she was moved by what I wrote. I was inspired, I wanted to learn English well.
今天，我很開心，因為我的英語老師表揚了我。上周，她叫我們交作業，是關于描述爸爸的。當她發回作業時，在全班同學面前表揚了我，因為我全心全意地去寫。她說被我寫的感動。我受到了鼓舞，想要把英語學好。
四年級閱讀英語作文范文四：
堆雪人
Making a Snowman
As the winter has come, the weather becomes so cold and there comes the snow. I love snow so much, because I can play with my friends outside, we play many games with the snow. The most exciting thing is to make a snowman. We make different shapes every year, this year, I want to build a Mickey Mouse.
冬天來了,天氣變得非常寒冷,下起了雪。我很喜歡雪,因為我可以和我的朋友在外面玩耍,我們用雪玩很多游戲。最激動人心的是堆雪人。我們每年都做不同的形狀,今年,我想堆一個米老鼠。