五年級英語作文及點評
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My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要領點評】
這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的'外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。
小朋友們在寫作文時，要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞[組]，以免寫出一些錯句子。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標點正確、書寫清晰、規范等。
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要領點評】
這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”，小作者沒有說一些空話，而是從自己的.親身經歷寫起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強調了星期天的喜好，寫得自然、流暢。
小朋友們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的變化，要依據提示，結合自己的實際，寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。
My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作介紹了自己家的家庭成員，以及此刻他們正在干什么，表達了自己對家人的感情。
時態：由于本單元主要講的是現在進行時態，所以建議采用現在進行時態。
句型：主語+be+動詞的現在分詞。
注意：本單元的重點是現在進行時態，注意在寫句子時要保持時態的.完整性，即系動詞和動詞的ing缺一不可。
In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是用現在進行時描繪出公園里的人和動物們正在進行的.活動還運用了一般現在時敘述了公園美麗的景色。
時態：這篇文章可以采用一般現在時和現在進行時兩種時態，由于本單元的語法項目是現在進行時，因此，描述的重點要放在現在進行時態上。
句型：一般現在時：主語+謂語+其他
現在進行時：
(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主語+v.-ing+其他?
(2)主語+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.
【要領點評】
這篇作文的題目是“在廚房”里，作者根據自己家的廚房情況。介紹廚房里有微波爐和電爐，有一張大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及媽媽在做飯，非常真實。
小朋友們，可以從觀察自己身邊的事、物寫起，利用所學的`句子，描述身邊熟悉的東西來訓練習作。
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